The first time I…

Posted: November 4, 2004 in everything else
The first time I…
pulled a guy
he left me for five years
The second time
I pulled a guy
he asked me five more times
that second time
he was never mine
his heart belonged
to
another
man
oh my,
the second time I pulled a guy
he was out and out
a gay man
ha, ha ha.
well, that was my attempt at writing poetry in creative writing..
hands up who thinks I should hand it in??
creative criticisms folks…
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Comments
  1. Anonymous says:

    I *particularly* like the little rhyme

    “oh my,
    the second time i pulled a guy”

    !

    My hand is totally up.

  2. Anonymous says:

    That was Emily.

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